TALLOK – David Luz (Launch Pad)
0| The Launch Pad Manuscript Competition Presents… | |
| Title: | TALLOK |
| Logline: | In a world where a winged race has enslaved humans for centuries, a human resistance arises, led by a young princess. |
| Pitch: | GAME OF THRONES meets MISTBORN TRILOGY |
| Writer: | David Luz |
| Genre: | Adventure | Fantasy | Young Adult |
| Why to Read: | This manuscript is the start of the next big fantasy franchise. The writing is active and engaging, combining beautiful prose with detailed world-building. The characters explode off the page, each one distinct and relatable, combining wonderful attributes with clear flaws. In particular, Princess Grasdin, who has all the GAME OF THRONES’ Daenerys Targaryen qualities you could hope for, while still remaining incredibly distinct. This dichotomy in each character extends throughout the manuscript, allowing each side of the conflict both positive and negative traits, creating a true moral complexity that only the best of fiction can achieve. Packed with explosive action, exciting conflict and political intrigue, this book has something for everyone. |
| Request: | CLICK HERE TO REQUEST THE MANUSCRIPT |
